13/9/2018
1P
Introduction
Hi my name is Jordan today I am going to do an adventure to explore more about the dormant
volcano Rangitoto island at 7.30. Rangitoto island is a volcano that isn't extinct yet,
some people say it will probably still do like a big massive action and it will probably
explode big rocks out of the volcano.
volcano Rangitoto island at 7.30. Rangitoto island is a volcano that isn't extinct yet,
some people say it will probably still do like a big massive action and it will probably
explode big rocks out of the volcano.
2P
Orientation
I get blamed for something I do not do at school or at my house or at my
cousins and uncles house. Sometimes when I run around the house
one of my cousins does something wrong and blame it on one of
my siblings or me.
cousins and uncles house. Sometimes when I run around the house
one of my cousins does something wrong and blame it on one of
my siblings or me.
3P
I went to Rangitoto Island, I got warned for going to Rangitoto island on
friday at 7.30. because it will probably shake and make the mountain
brake and make the snow go down the big massive mountain but it
is a volcano that is a dormant volcano that will erupt any time, any
day and any where.
friday at 7.30. because it will probably shake and make the mountain
brake and make the snow go down the big massive mountain but it
is a volcano that is a dormant volcano that will erupt any time, any
day and any where.
5w´s
Why? Because it will probably do a big massive action.
Where? Rangitoto island.
What? Volcano might erupt on Rangitoto island
Who? Me Jordan going on a adventure.
When? Going at 7.30.
Hey Jordan, I really like the way that you used the word
extinct that tells me that it is no longer active.
extinct that tells me that it is no longer active.
Kahukura
Hi Jordan, I really like the way that you put the three
elements in bold and I like the way you described
the volcano.
elements in bold and I like the way you described
the volcano.
Hope
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